My Cinderella Narrative Retelling

Once upon a time there was a girl named Ella with a happy father and mother. One day her mother started getting sick. Ella and her father were scared that she wouldn't survive. Sadly their fear came true and the mother passed away. The Father decided to marry another woman. The woman was selfish and cruel. She had two step daughters named Anastasia and Drizella, who would secretly pick their noses. The step daughters called her Cinderella because she had ash all over her. A Prince nearby set up a ball. He gave invites all around town to find a princess himself.The problem was that Cinderella couldn't go to the ball because her Step Mother said “You can’t go until you’ve finished your chores”. “She took a look at the kitchen. It was so filthy that it would take a week to clean! 

Cinderella’s Fairy-Godmother gave Cinderella a beautiful, bright, blue dress to wear, and some shiny, glass, slippers. The mice turned into horsemen and the pigeons suddenly turned into horses. A plain pumpkin turned into a carriage. Her Fairy Godmother also reminded her that the spells only lasted until midnight. Prince Charming finally found a perfect fit for the glass slipper who was Cinderella. Prince Charming held Cinderella in his arms. Days later, Cinderella and the Prince got married.